Saturday, May 20, 2017

Kiko recounts our visit to the Temple


Learner: Kiko
Date: 19 May, 2017
Learning Area: English Level One
Purpose and Audience: Recognise that texts are shaped for different purposes and audiences
Learning Coach: P.L
Learning Observed
In writing, we have been learning about recounts. A recount is an event that is retold by a learner in their own words. We have been learnings lots about paragraphs and how to plan our ideas effectively. Kiko is beginning to build her sentences into paragraphs. She is capable by recognising that paragraphs have one main idea. Kiko works collaboratively by orally co-constructing sentences with other learners around her and listens carefully to others share their ideas. She is curious about gifted words and is beginning to make connections with her prior learning.
Kiko wrote about our school trip to the Fo Guan Shan temple in Flatbush. Here she is sharing her writing with us.
Evidence of Learning
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Next Learning Steps
  • Continue to use gifted words in other pieces of writing
  • Continue to build sentences into paragraphs